Miss Blackborow thought our location, costume and mise-en-scene were all really good and she really liked the chereographed moves down Little Marlbourough street.
She really seemed to like the split screen we have been working on too.
Here's her advice:
- We need really tight shots cutting into her face; CU on eyes
- More cutesy type shots on her legs
- She needs to exaggerate more when she dances around; facial expressions, winking to the camera, blowing kisses, flirting, head movements.
- Tight close shots of her spinning round towards the camera
- Shots of her turning into the camera frame; so that she's doing all the work
- She would like more choreographed moves
- More movement of arms, legs, body genstures
- Head moving, sitting down
- Coming up to the camera very close
- Be more voyeuristic- use it to our advantage and play on it
- Use the public interest more; film their reactions more and have sian interacting with them more. Film the market traders reactions to sian down Bricklane.
- Changes of pace; running, skipping
- crazy movements
- wides/cut-aways for reactions mise-en-scenes
- Should film the red bus in brick lane and have sian running up stairs. Get customers reactions.
We are happy with our feedback, and glad that miss likes our footage so far. We think our camera work was good but definitely do need more moving shots which will alter the pace of the video.
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